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Revolution
Revolution
Against the British
American evolution
A national wish
Against the British
We stand tall
A national wish
Though many fall
We stand tall
Through the fire
Though many fall
Freedom we desire
Through the fire
In our strife
Freedom we desire
A new life
In our strife
American evolution
A new life
Revolution
Revolution
Against the British
American evolution
A national wish
Against the British
We stand tall
A national wish
Though many fall
We stand tall
Through the fire
Though many fall
Freedom we desire
Through the fire
In our strife
Freedom we desire
A new life
In our strife
American evolution
A new life
Revolution
This was an assignment for my Creative Writing: Poetry class at school. We had to write a Pantoum, which I think our teacher said is a French form of poetry. I was strapped for ideas, so after lunch, this popped into my head. It's about the American Revolution.
My friend,
, says I sound really old for writing this since it's in Present-tense instead of Past-tense.
I feel bad for writing this since I'm a Hetalia fan, though D:
What do you think?
~Kiwi
My friend,
, says I sound really old for writing this since it's in Present-tense instead of Past-tense.I feel bad for writing this since I'm a Hetalia fan, though D:
What do you think?
~Kiwi
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I made an AMV!!!
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